I think that there’s a lot of good material here that’s moving in the right dire

I think that there’s a lot of good material here that’s moving in the right direction. However, I think that you need to think a bit more on the kind of arguable and actionable solution that the AP is about. While there’s a lot of good suggestions/ideas here, I think that we need to have a sense for how you’re going to implement them. For instance, you argue that students and teachers should have face to face meetings. This is of course correct, but are the K-12 teachers with a ton of students going to be given a raise for this extra time? How will we implement this policy? College teachers are paid for office hours(it’s part of my contract, so don’t hesitate to schedule some), do we need to do this for secondary and primary school teachers?
Basically, I need to see specific proposals, and proposals grounded in evidence like these initial goals are. I like that the outcomes you have are grounded in evidence – you should have the same kinds of evidence for the policies that will lead to these outcomes.
There are also comments in the PDF. Please address all the comments. You can refer “5 Argumentative Frameworks” for making arguable and actionable solutions for this paper.

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